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I got this letter from Arthur in my spam box. I thought it could use a bit of editing, so I made some edits and added a few comments. I really feel that if you are going to send out a letter to a boat-load of people, you really should make sure that it is up to snuff.  Arthur is elderly, so we can cut him a little slack, but I just think the poor guy needed a little guidance.  Of course, I don’t pretend to be an English teacher, but most of the suggestions are just good common sense.

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